Take My Breath Away

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  • Passion

    Take My Breath Away

    All my passion is running through my veins
    It runs so wild it's hard to grab the reigns

    He traces my body with his hands
    I never know where they are going to land

    He makes sure he touches every inch of my skin
    There isn't an area he hasn't been

    He kisses my neck then starts going south
    He never misses a spot with his mouth

    He always knows how to erase my stress away
    I never thought I could love him more and more everyday

    I trust him with my body when he is in control
    He will remain the one who has my heart and soul

    Like the cold wind on a winter's day
    He will always take my breath away

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    DerekH commented on Take My Breath Away

    06-22-2009

    You can feel the love and passion in your poem. It made me think of the woman I love. Really enjoyed it.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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