Talitha Cumi

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This is one of my early poems, written in 2003, I believe. My aunt was blind from her early 20s, and though several surgeries had restored some sight - at one time, I remember, she could see colors, if the sun was shining on them - she was otherwise blind throughout the rest of her life. She had an amazing memory, though, and still managed to work crossword and jumble puzzles from the newspaper. Something someone said at her funeral inspired me to write this; I knew instantly when he said, "Can you imagine, being blind for 60 years, then opening your eyes, and having HIS face be the first one you see in all that time?" that I had to use that image. The rest followed from the physical pain she endured, the loss of other family members who had preceded her in death, and our family's common religious beliefs. And it eases the pain of losing them, to think of them all together.

Talitha Cumi

Talitha Cumi

by Connie Foy

 

“Talitha cumi,” the soft voice said.

“Awake, arise, and leave your bed.

Come with me, your body shed,

for God delights in the life you’ve led.”

 

Her pain was gone, and in its place

a gentle warmth now touched her face.

“Courageous child, look now at me

and know that God has set you free.”

 

Her eyes, once blind, now opened wide

to see who stood there by her side.

Her darkness gone, no longer night,

she wept for joy upon the sight.

 

Our Savior then did help her rise,

His face the first to greet her eyes.

As praises bubbled past her lips,

He gently squeezed her fingertips.

 

“Your songs are pleasant to the ear,

and We are glad to have you near.

Yet in Our love, another gift:

the presence here of those you’ve missed.”

 

He gestured then, and she turned ’round

to see them waiting to be found.

Father, mother, husband, brother,

bound by love for one another.

 

In Heaven now, these angels sing,

thanking God for everything.

Their songs are full of joy and laughter,

peace and love, forever after.

 

 

in memory of Margaret Susan Stansell Osborn (1918-2002)

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rsalassi commented on Talitha Cumi

10-22-2010

A beautiful write with a beautiful idea...that God grants His benevolence at the time of one's death. Nicely done.

Wesa

10/24/2010

Thank you. Of course the reality is probably much more complex - if indeed there is such a thing at all. I don't claim to know the answers, but I liked this picture. Wish I could claim credit for the idea, but it actually came from one of the men who spoke at her funeral.

kdarcy commented on Talitha Cumi

10-17-2010

Poets shed feelings to and with the world, never knowing how deeply or far they travel, nor the rewards given to both the readers or hearers of those words. Well said, and a fine tribute to love. Thanks for the sharing, be well k

Wesa

10/18/2010

Thank you, K. I did - and still do - love her very much. It pleases me that that emotion comes through to readers.

WordSlinger commented on Talitha Cumi

10-15-2010

This is a great poem, all of it much to appreciate, thanks WS

Wesa

10/15/2010

Thank you. And thanks for reading!

Olan01 commented on Talitha Cumi

10-13-2010

This is most excellent in form, meaning, meter and manner. I love every word. Olan

Wesa

10/15/2010

Thank you, Olan. That means a lot to me. :D

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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