Talk to Me

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Quiet men, i love one. He is what he is, there is no changing that. I wish sometimes he could win the fight inside you see, and finally talk to me.....

Talk to Me

There was a time it was f! that noise
then there was yelling at the boys
an alcoholic cacophany
we put the fun in dysfunctionality.

Only a wish for peace and quiet
then it was there
and there was you
and quiet you could do.

I had scars, horrors to tell
i needed to cry and scream and yell.
A listener you turned out to be.
A perfect friend for me.

I have talked it through
and here are you
quiet in your independence
but nothing to say hence.

I see your horrors now
and wish for you to take a turn
and talk it through and learn
how healing it can be to let it out you see.
Please, just talk to me.

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cutbanksam commented on Talk to Me

02-27-2012

The mother of one of my children never talks. I mean never!! It drove me so crazy I just gave up trying to communicate with her and told her that if she wouldn't talk I wouldn't try by either calling or seeing her again. We do share a 38 daughter though. When one is so silent I think something mental is going on up there. It ain't natural nor agreeable to others. Even my mother gave up trying to talk to her.

Tempestlady

03/31/2012

Eventually it is like being alone anytime you are with them...sux

BrokenHeart2009 commented on Talk to Me

11-08-2011

I like how you wrote this poem and how you made it come together with life and conviction.

Tempestlady

11/15/2011

This one was somewhat painful to write because a very special person in my life is a very quiet soul and this makes me more restless than usual.....LOL.

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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