Target

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    Target




    This pain is undeniable stabbing me like darts

    I wonder why I'm the target of something so dark

    this cloud is inevitable always weighing me down

    the storm soaks me heart and yet i make no sound.

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    Dano commented on Target

    04-21-2010

    alot of feelings in just a short amount of words... great expression... nicely written
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    trainpain

    04/22/2010

    thanks!

    trainpain commented on Target

    04-09-2010

    thanks. :)
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    BringMeBullets commented on Target

    04-09-2010

    So powerful in such a short write. But I love it. I'll save this to my favorites. To be honest, I think this might be my favorite out of all your work. So far, anyway. Wonderful. Thank you for sharing.
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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