Tear me down

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    Tear me down

    Damn you tear me down past the point of rebuilding
    amazing how you shatter my fiber down to the splint
    ... make me face the shit I can't bear wit ,
    and I just can't stand it
    how honest you are not scared of the challenge,
    I thought I had a foundation of brick
    but you saw my castle is made of sand and you have no problem stomping all over it...
    wash my foundation away with your love then you take your hands into mine and help me rebuild...
    I guess all I can say is thank you
    a hurricane of insecurity broke my heart down and filled it with pain...
    but your smile is the sunnny day after all the rain...
    many hearts have sailed the ocean of love...
    some crash amidst its jagged reefs below or capsize from the raging storms above
    some hearts drift endlessly from island to island in search of paradise
    Want so badly to find land they bounce from heart to heart , to anchor they just didn't have time
    Some are lucky and crash triumphantly against the beaches of true love
    We are all in search of the promised land .... only question is can your heart stay afloat during the storms

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    Chaos128 commented on Tear me down

    06-08-2009

    Allegorical, direct and true. I couldn't quite reconcile the main theme of the work with the startling first line, but it sure got my attention. Really good job!

    odphipoet

    06/09/2009

    why thank you ; - ) I have loads of poems but they are all on facebook.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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