Tell My Mother...

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    Tell My Mother...

    Tell my Mother- Her independence has constructed my own. Her love smothered me- To a point were too much space instills a sadness. Tell My mother- I know I make her proud. That I can never break the dreams she has drawn out for me. Tell her- I know ive been difficult That it hasnt been easy for either of us. But more importantly tell her Never to take me off her pedestal. To never stop believing in everything that I am. Tell her I appreciate everything shes ever done That I dont regret the fights That I looked foward to our sunday lunches. Tell her that I love her, will you?

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    Musicmynded1 commented on Tell My Mother...

    04-07-2010

    I like the truthfulness of this poem, and how bright-heartened it is.

    sammia commented on Tell My Mother...

    04-03-2010

    Very nicely written, keep up the good writing and keep sharing...I have a

    chalkout91 commented on Tell My Mother...

    04-03-2010

    @Lady: its complicated I despise her hehe

    kpeery09 commented on Tell My Mother...

    04-03-2010

    Very Nice, the words of a beautiful person written beautifully on here. keep up the good work and always give your mother hugs and tell her you love her no matter what because even though you think you dont mean it now, later on in life you will. I give you 10

    LadyL714 commented on Tell My Mother...

    04-03-2010

    Beautiful words...but I wonder why don't YOU tell her?

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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