temptations

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    once again this poem is based on past events

    temptations
    To cut or not to cut
    the decision is so close together
    its like a drug
    so powerful
    so addicting
    I'm trying my hardest to fight it
    but its such a release


    in the worst way


    after i do it i feel so bad
    and in order to deal with it
    i cut again
    its a never ending cycle
    it controls me and everything i do
    i thought i was over this
    but as soon as someone mentions it
    i want it
    more and more

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    Qualin commented on temptations

    06-14-2010

    GET RID OF THE demon THERE ARE BETTER WAYS,I'M NOT SURE OF GIVING THE devil ANY RECOGNITION IS EXCEPTABLE, BUT AGAIN I HAVE BEEN WRONG MANY TIMES...I JUST CAN'T REMEMBER WHEN...LOL QUALIN
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    Chaos128 commented on temptations

    05-12-2010

    A frank exposition of an anguishing condition. It took gut to put this out there.
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    Dano commented on temptations

    04-21-2010

    1553 days... this piece is very personal for me and brings up haunting memories of my past... the temptations...still... are almost too much to take some days... but counting forward and a promise that i made keeps the razor off of my skin... thank you for sharing
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    trainpain commented on temptations

    04-21-2010

    ya the scars do suck. thanks for the advice.
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    BringMeBullets commented on temptations

    04-21-2010

    It's a great write... And I have been there myself... The bad thing about it is that the scars don't go away... You must be careful. There are other ways of getting rid of stress as well, Katie. Don't do something you're going to regret.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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