TEST OF LOVE: R U READY?

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    TEST OF LOVE: R U READY?

    IN ORDER TO TEST YOUR RELATIONSHIP 

    LOOK YOUR PARTNER IN THE EYE AND SAY I LOVE YOU.

    TAKE YOUR HEART AND LAY IT ON THE KITCHEN TABLE 

    LOOK YOUR PARTNER IN THE EYE N SAY I JUST NEED TO KNOW IT YOU LOVE ME.

    WALK OVER TO YOUR SILVERWARE DRAWER AND PULL OUT A KNIFE 

    HAND IT TO YOUR PARTNER 

    IF THEY STAB YOUR HEART,IT WONT WORK THEY R ONLY THERE TO WATCH YOU BLEED

    BUT IF THEY GO TO YOUR CABINET AND GRAB A ZIP- LOCK BAG TO PUT YOUR HEART N AND GIVE IT

    BACK TO YOU THAN THEY LOVE YOU BECAUSE THEY LOVE YOU AND REALIZE IN ORDER TO LOVE THEM YOU NEED YOUR HEART.

    BUT BEFORE YOU PUT YOUR HEART ON THE TABLE YOU HAVE TO LET DOWN YOUR GUARD N FACE THE RISK.

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    cmlestrade commented on TEST OF LOVE: R U READY?

    11-25-2009

    Nice, so symbolic but this raises the question that if one thas to test the relationship is it even worth therisk taking. Good write.

    mcelvain

    11/30/2009

    wow, you are so right but i never thought of it,thanks for reading.

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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