Testament of Un-Clutching

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I am an imaginal self who is trying to connect with those who feel this and want support as I do. Lets create a new world together......

Testament of Un-Clutching

Testament of Un-Clutching

shedding my robe of discontent,

all fleshly desires are

consciously spent

shifted now completely,

from my heart spills only love

less thought, more enlightenment

below and up above

from all insanity un-clutched

spontaneously evolved and a new self, untouched

the illusion of arrogance, rudeness and pride,

must not only be dissolved ,

it must not be kept alive

no longer judged, interrupted and never harmed

getting out of conflict with the body and mind

no longer searching for happiness

that cannot be found

setting aside encoded memories

driven into the ground

and walking into a new life,

free of hate, loss and strife

separate from the world's whores

act in love and spirit,

brain in hypnosis no more

embryos are daily downloaded

with the world in store

DNA-thoughts cannot forever be controlled

healing and ascension cannot be bought and sold

encapsulated dis-ease born in fighting and want

planted in the mind with fear and haunt

toying with humanity in every way

losing validity every day,

laws and world order gone astray

prophetic enhancements without clarity

create, dream, survive or disparity

chemicals in the brain on drugs rely

colas, mixed drinks, burgers and fries

where a sense of passion does not exist

mother nature replaces it with a twist

vibrations at the speed of light

moving the negative from all sight

even religion is designed to keep

the control of the illusion, souls to reap

 people driven astray by massive misdeeds

pick up a plough, plant a seed

economic warfare, the hitman has arrived

every clash and calamity contrived

created catastrophes will come and go

disasters designed, to control the ebb and flow

years, millinea in time slide idly by

the time to stand is drawing nigh

 

-M. Jacobs

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nayachiro commented on Testament of Un-Clutching

10-18-2011

I got it ! A good write with meter that reminded me of rapping, which seemed to give it xtra force and punch as I read deeper. The transmutation to a higher place, if we can but heed, if we can but heed. A new life. Thought of you as was back in Shaker for 40th HS reunion this last weekend. Now on plane back to SF, at 30,000 ft. take care

MalikPeterson commented on Testament of Un-Clutching

07-24-2011

At first when I start reading this I felt like the piece was about letting go..then it turned into the current state of things...and the ending seems to be telling us that we are running out of time to get our acts together lol. This is what I took from the piece...and the ebb and flow that you cited in the piece is a characteristic of what you have written here...and I like it...and I give you kudos for it!!!

danmartyjake1

07/25/2011

Many thanks for that powerful comment to it. I appreciate your reading and commenting, I barely hear any feedback anymore from the site. ;-) stay in touch.

Redhead505 commented on Testament of Un-Clutching

03-22-2011

I love the flow; so many complex thoughts caught in just a phrase. There's enough to think about in this piece to last a lifetime of contemplation. Thank you for letting me know this one was posted. I've been away for quite sometime and it was good to come home to this work.

danmartyjake1

06/20/2011

Thanks for that wonderful response to it. I really appreciate hearing from other writers and readers on here. I am here for you and I get inspired by you. Keep writing.

bklynrizz commented on Testament of Un-Clutching

03-16-2011

Very creative, I liked the way if flowed. As I was reading it to mind came a wrap beat. I especialy liked the lines' "the illusion of arrogance, rudeness and pride, must not only be dissolved , it must not be kept alive. Well done.

danmartyjake1

06/20/2011

Thanks fro your words on the poem, love your comments and hearing from other writers on here. ;-)

laydbak1 commented on Testament of Un-Clutching

03-15-2011

Marian, I do believe you should run for public office or at least make your services available to speech-writers on Capitol Hill... Every politician uses a reduced version of this style, yet most lack the prophetic strength you have for fear of perhaps going over the heads of the masses they're trying to seduce... It would be a welcome change though... Well done... Kudo's from here...

danmartyjake1

06/20/2011

Wow, I don't believe I 've ever received such a nice accolade to my writing. Many thanks, especially as it comes from a writer I admire so much..;-)

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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