TeTaNuS

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Written way back in 2001

TeTaNuS

Shaking hands hold a rusty needle 
With a thread thinner than air
As I sew myself together again
After decades of dispair.

But the stitches I make will come undone
Just like they always do
And a rusty needle will mend the flesh
Of another ugly wound...

I know how
Im poisoned now
The needle's rust fullfilled its vow
For every stitch 
That I will sew
A life long minute I will owe...

Shaking hands hold a rusty needle 
With a thread thinner than air
As I sew myself together again
After decades of dispair.

But the stitches I make will come undone
Just like they always do
And a rusty needle will mend the flesh
Of another ugly wound...

I know how
Im poisoned now
The needle's rust fullfilled its vow
For every stitch 
That I will sew
A life long minute I will owe...

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Romano commented on TeTaNuS

10-28-2009

In life we all will endure pain, anguish and heartache, yet in time all wounds will be healed. a broken heart is only a mere reflection of having the capacity to love and love again. With each wound different hurt same wound bigger or smaller scar. being able to hold your head up after each fall is your praise during the trial and tribulation

dumplin commented on TeTaNuS

10-28-2009

why did you feel it necessary to repeat yourself? I would have liked the second half to have something a little different in it. It's really good writing, though. Thanks!

Romano

10/28/2009

Most artist repeat themselves to let you know that its a circle and it will happen again. in this piece he is letting us know that its the same hurt yet different times throughout life

Rainz

10/28/2009

Thank you both, and yes, Romano called it

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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