Tha Heart

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this is not very gud but i thought of it off the dome and i typed it so here it is comment and rate

Tha Heart

Tha Heart is very complex 
Tha Heart is very hard headed
It has no remorse 
It goes after what it wants and is attached
Tha heart wants what it wants 
&nd tha heart never descriminates 
It likes what it likes 
&nd one day it could be you or you or you or me 
Tha heart is very soft
So when yhu have it in your hands make sure you are gentle and kind
because if yhu aren't and yhu break it it just might break you!

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cmlestrade commented on Tha Heart

09-12-2009

Very good representation of what I can only term as a warning of poetic justice. it is true that some of us think with our hearts instead of our minds. That's why we're the poets and artists of the world.

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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