THE ABANDONE LOVER

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    THE ABANDONE LOVER

    WHY DO FEEL LONELY ?
    COULD YOU TALK TO ME,
    WHAT IS HAPPENING TO ME?
    PLEASE TALK TO ME,
    MY LOVER HAD GONE.
    YOUR LOVER!
    HOW COME,
    I WOULD'NT KNOW,
    PEEP,HAD SHE GONE?
    DO YOU SEE HER?
    AND SHE SAID TILL DEATH DO US PATH,

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    oyak commented on THE ABANDONE LOVER

    04-21-2010

    This poem is good

    Tosky commented on THE ABANDONE LOVER

    04-22-2009

    I like your poem my friend

    oyak

    03/03/2011

    thanks for been there my friend.I love your comment.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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