The Angel

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    The Angel

    I was walking alone in the cold dark night,
    The winds blowing hard, no one in sight.
    I was tired and afraid to go on,
    Thought that there'd never be a dawn.
    Just then came an angel out of the sky,
    To hold my hand when I was about to cry.
    She gave me courage to make it through.
    By her company I had no time's clue.
    Soon emerged the clear blue skies,
    With the angel I had made strong ties.
    But then it was time for her to go.
    So I became sad, down and low.
    Now that you've left I have your memory,
    I'll miss you a lot, thanks for helping me.....

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    JayJ420 commented on The Angel

    06-29-2010

    reminds me of all my angels...haha great write....Jay-J

    Tempy commented on The Angel

    12-31-2009

    hey In enjoyed this alot. it flowed so brilliantly. good to see you writing again. keep it up :)

    Platti commented on The Angel

    12-29-2009

    I really enjoyed this poem, there are many people I'm sure that wish they can find that same Angel. :)

    BrittKun commented on The Angel

    12-20-2009

    Great poem!!!! in line 6 I think it should be hand not had? Great flow of words and rhythms. 9 ; )

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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