the animal inside you is wild

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Missed everyone

the animal inside you is wild

unleashing your inner animal
to hell with rational
it's all just laughable
and none too practical
burning in the flame
yet not inflammable
everything you needed
became invisible 
and the world was leaning towards 
Being overly predictable
The choices they were making
Was drowning in a feeling
Not so comfortable
so inside there was instinct
unleashed an inner Lynx 
not concerned with how
Upon instructing you to blink
3 2 1 and no more would you think
when hypnotizing deceiving words 
Dig to fester and burn 
marketing a game association just to link
A long winding journey
another wretched fume to drink
Watching seeing if you swim 
Or just how far you sink
thought the stop and stare
was someone who didn't care
or just another claiming life's not fair
Dangerous demons  to which you don't compare
Money and greed acting on a dare
but needless to say 
Although they were not there
Inside them was a bear 
although they did stray they weren't actually headed anywhere
it was not them going the wrong way
The blame they would not share
and in your hearts the feeling of dismay
There lungs no longer taking in any good air 
and no longer could you try to convey
life as it seemed to find a way
to suppress all you needed to say
and you didn't stand up
and say it's not okay
you just sat and listened
and simply obeyed
got down on your knees 
and started to pray
meanwhile the days were passing away
while evil has wound itself in today
you will still wandering 
so far away
unleashing your inner animal
to hell with rational
it's all just laughable
and none too practical
burning in the flame
yet not inflammable
everything you needed
became invisible 
and the world was leaning towards 
Being overly predictable
The choices they were making
Was drowning in a feeling
Not so comfortable
so inside there was instinct
unleashed an inner Lynx 
not concerned with how
Upon instructing you to blink
3 2 1 and no more would you think
when hypnotizing deceiving words 
Dig to fester and burn 
marketing a game association just to link
A long winding journey
another wretched fume to drink
Watching seeing if you swim 
Or just how far you sink
thought the stop and stare
was someone who didn't care
or just another claiming life's not fair
Dangerous demons  to which you don't compare
Money and greed acting on a dare
but needless to say 
Although they were not there
Inside them was a bear 
although they did stray they weren't actually headed anywhere
it was not them going the wrong way
The blame they would not share
and in your hearts the feeling of dismay
There lungs no longer taking in any good air 
and no longer could you try to convey
life as it seemed to find a way
to suppress all you needed to say
and you didn't stand up
and say it's not okay
you just sat and listened
and simply obeyed
got down on your knees 
and started to pray
meanwhile the days were passing away
while evil has wound itself in today
you will still wandering 
so far away

Tempy  

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Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

pura’s Poems (54)

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the animal inside you is wild 0
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Knotted bot heart 0
Tall Dark and Handsome 2
Short 1
Profile the stalker 1
Oh my gosh! 0
New note 0
Confusion is my muse 0
swim 0
Overdrive 0
Electrically charged Instrument 0
courage to stand the pouring rain 1
No one knows 1
Fractal collider 0
Ejected safety gifts 0
Vacancy 0
cold shoulder palm off 0
A hollow log 1
Oh well no where is real 0
What is one to do 0
No don't Bloom 0
stabbered back 0
A flower that won't bloom 1
Was it ever worth it 0
vocal 0
I can look beyond flaws Can you? 1
Stranger Nowadays 1
PAST Grief 0
Lock that door behind you 2
I refuse 2
Only the lonely 0
Emotional Rear View Error! 1
Leaf 0
All to appreciate 2
The Evidence that Proves Truth 0
Who Knows 2
A Memory and a Body 1
Code Red - Distinguishab
le fallacy
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Deeper Still 1
Sink Or Spin 0
Reality and the Facade 0
ALL SAID AND DONE 1
Chained to natures heart blocker 0
what does it all mean! 0
Filter 0
Dreamer oh Daydreamer 0
does not fit into their world view 0
B sides 1
If I Had A Voice 2
Whatever it takes to never make that mistake, Again. 2