The Beautiful Outside

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    The Beautiful Outside

    The outside is one oh the wildest wonders
    When it storms in outside it always thunders
    The outside world has many things to see
    Each place outside that life takes you is where you should probably be
    The outside is a beautiful place
    Always for everyone no matter what race
    You can play outside or you can be wild
    When your outside try to smile
    If people ever make you feel down
    Just go outside and be a clown
    Talk to people from the outside
    Just ride on your bike or in your car
    The outside will take you very far!

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    Paradice21 commented on The Beautiful Outside

    07-26-2009

    So well wrote...I like this one! A fun and meaningful poem! Keep on writing you are ‎so talented Young Lady!‎

    ccslim commented on The Beautiful Outside

    03-24-2009

    Hehehe I wanna go outside! Great flow great content but they gonna get ya for spelling errors like dad burn teachers with red ink! wOOt me see a future Sis!

    HERSHEY commented on The Beautiful Outside

    02-20-2009

    This poem is so true. I love the way your words rhymed and the tone was so relaxing. You can write little lady!!

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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