The beauty discovered

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    It is an artistic describe by the beauty lover who imagines and dreams about the beauty of a woman.

    The beauty discovered


    The forehead a tiny east

    That the east goes far most

     

    The hair shadows the time

    That the night forgets to arrive

     

    The nose perfect in sculpture

    That the lovely rose is reticent

     

    The structure an ultimate shape

    That the nature lacking of drape

     

    Eyes glow as attractive stars

    That the galaxy also amazed

     

    Lips signify the transparent smile

    That the smile fear to challenge

     

    The face a new definition of glamour

    That the mirror gazes at the charm

     

    Voice reverberate the music

    That the melody jumps into voice

     

    The gait slow and flow like current

    That the swans hesitate to follow

     

    The heart real as temple of love

    That the angels suspicious of theirs

     

    The intellect collective of creative

    That the creator is proud of its naive

     

    Is it a dream or imagination?

    If real, how fortunate that the earth

    Is walked on by those tender steps

     

    And how lucky that its soul mate

    To walk seven steps with the beauty

     

    Oh, let the dream become true once

    And may the beauty earn many hearts 


                         By: R K CHOWDARY 

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    jeanpnkldyg commented on The beauty discovered

    02-22-2011

    You have a unique voice, and her beauty really comes through..

    sanctus commented on The beauty discovered

    02-21-2011

    Compelling read. Nicely constructed..................

    RKCHOWDARY11

    02/21/2011

    Hi Dear sanctus How do you do? Thank you for your read and promoting comment. I request you to the other poems too as per your convenience and let me know your opinion. I will be happy to add you as my friend Bye for now With good wishes. R K Chowdary

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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