The Big Bang Is Not History

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ty to LW for the seed thought ...(c) 2009-2011 Dancing Hawk / Eve Hogard. Find this copyrighted work at this blog: dancinghawk.blogspot.com

The Big Bang Is Not History

Mars
Venus

One compressed everything,
and then
BANG
e x p a n d i n g
but still

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icu2 commented on The Big Bang Is Not History

12-28-2009

My goodness! This is quite a poem! Yes, the web is set in motion...now let's just see the end results. Will it all blow up in our faces someday? BOOM! Or...maybe it already has...and it's just getting bigger, as you say. So awesomly done!

dancinghawk

12/28/2009

right on, icu2! really glad this speaks to you - it's an amazing theory, isn't it?? ty so much for the visit! -dh

gogant commented on The Big Bang Is Not History

12-26-2009

It is interesting to think on the theory that the universe is moving away from us (we here on earth) at an awesome pace...but what if there is another one of us...would a being on some far away planet have the same theory ? Just pondering after reading your poem, Dancer....................................gogant

dancinghawk

12/26/2009

u make it sound like we are separate from the universe, lol ... but indeed, many others for sure :) :) -dh

jademelissa74 commented on The Big Bang Is Not History

12-23-2009

Wow! A thought-provoking piece, filled with metaphoric content that makes you spin. There is so much meaning at face value. You own much talent and charisma :)) Thank you for posting. Merry Christmas to you and yours~

dancinghawk

12/23/2009

ty for your generous note, jademelissa74! blessings to you in 2010 and beyond! -dh

MalikPeterson commented on The Big Bang Is Not History

12-20-2009

This is a good one dh...I understand about the web and all but I also looked at it as a metaphor for humanity and the reproduction dance we do on daily basis causing daily expansion...you know...women are from mars and men are from venus lol...so indeed you have inspired depth in thinking with this one...May the Kudos be with you forever!!!!

dancinghawk

12/20/2009

lol! ty for your enthusiastic comment and time in visiting! -dh

dancinghawk

12/20/2009

mmmmm ... also ... that ... Mars and Venus, even, are still one ... not Really separate ... tho we tend to think of them as so ... they are parts of one whole ... one expanding dot ... ty for a new perspective! -dh

MalikPeterson

12/23/2009

You are quite welcome :)

SavVySam commented on The Big Bang Is Not History

12-19-2009

There is so much to this fantastic write, that my mind is spinning wheels trying to gather momentum! Inexhaustible potential for discussion here! Some very deep thinking went into this significant piece! Just an awesome poem my friend!

dancinghawk

12/20/2009

ty so much, SavVySam! i'm honored by your visit, and glad this spoke to you! -dh

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