The Birth of the Queen

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The Birth of the Queen








Dwarves finish baking their bread neath stones.
As pixies and gnomes no longer roam;
but sing their songs from massive tombs:
composed on leaves of ash oak and thorn.

(The elves and drows all stand aback
in silent awe . . . lest the voices crack)
Bows of trees sway soft and slow:
to sweep away cares for those below.

Fireflies in dark fading night shine,
dancing; making merry star lines . . .
While faerie all as ever done
drifts off to sleep with the dawn.

Hushed comes the morn
in reverence; as smiling
my beloved  awakes.
and comes into my arms




© April 2010 origionalmerlin

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cousinsoren commented on The Birth of the Queen

04-22-2010

Sublime fantasy, Facetiously pleasant word-pkay, structurally perfect. Pathos idyllic.

keller commented on The Birth of the Queen

08-02-2009

Fantastical,I really like the fairytales of old,great write

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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For Your Information..
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The Birth of the Queen 18
The Queens Repose 33
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When She Loves Me 6
All Night 1
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Wings 3
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The Coming Of The Queen 0
Mnogiye veshi ( Russian) 1
Dyerzhi moi ruki 1
Momenti lyubvi 1
Now I lay me... 4
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Sorry Dante 12
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Many Things 4
If the World were a Bed 10
Eternity 16
From the Dream We Soon Shall Awake 22
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Eye, I, Aye (bluestoneeat
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Flowers 7
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