The Black Rose

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The Black Rose

Watching all the flowers bloom at the light of the day
And me at the dead of the night
They are so beautiful when they open
People love them with all there hearts
Then they look at me and they see a dead flower that needs to be thrown away.

As i watch every one get all the attention
I am stuck and being critized.
Then i am saved my this little girl with her blond curls and blue eyes;
She gave me all the attention that i always wanted;
Then she picked me for a amazing day.

As i walk down with her I see that she will be happy like me when she picked me
In her flower bouqet I was the only one who stood from the other flowers.
I know for sure that she will be happy as she made me happy of not making me feel alone in the world we all live in.

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SuziJean commented on The Black Rose

03-26-2013

I have never read the original. I will have to seek it out. Very good :)

animelover21385

03/27/2013

thx

SuziJean

03/27/2013

Your welcome.: )

animelover21385

03/29/2013

:)

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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