The blue in my eyes.

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    The blue in my eyes.
    The blue in my eyes are fading
    With each new tear I cry
    I pray to all that’s good above to please just let me die.

    Take me from this misery
    Take me from this pain
    Let me live in peace again, just take it all away.

    Stop my heart from breaking
    Stop my mind from thinking
    Stop the voices from screaming
    Stop it all and save me.

    I don’t know how much more I can take
    Before I completely go insane.

    That little voice inside my head keeps telling me I’d be better off dead that no one ever wants me around and all people do is put me down. That it doesn’t really matter how hard I try, I’ll never be good enough in anyone’s eyes.
    I’m nothing to no one but a pawn in their game, to use me and abuse me and keep me feeling this way.

    Before the blue is completely gone and my Spirit takes it’s flight. I have just one more thing to say….Lord, help me thru the night.

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    PRober commented on The blue in my eyes.

    07-19-2009

    very nice write... you pretty much summed up how many of us feel, and far too often! Write on!
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    rollerderby commented on The blue in my eyes.

    03-02-2009

    well written dear, I've been in that place you've written about. I made it through and you can too. You can't do it for anyone but yourself, because sometimes we are all we have. You have so much to live for, just LIVE!!! Doug
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    tmillander commented on The blue in my eyes.

    02-19-2009

    this is a good poem, it expresses many a one's thoughts through their perils and storms
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    drewking commented on The blue in my eyes.

    01-25-2009

    so sad,,another good pice of work...
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    Johnny commented on The blue in my eyes.

    01-12-2009

    I really liked this poem. I know all to well how it feels to be doing everything in the world that you can do , and it is just never enough ! We just have to find our own measure of worth and stop giving the power to others. Good luck !
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    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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