The Boy With No Name

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FYI, my poems w/pictures can be found within my personal web pages at: http://bridgette.8m.com/poemswisdom.html and http://bridgette.8m.com/poemswisdom2.html . The true short story accompanying The Boy With No Name can be found at: http://bridgette.8m.com/blank_4.html

The Boy With No Name


It wasn't fair that we met that way;

we should have, instead, been outside to play.

 

You covered in red and me feeling all grey,

next to each other in the hospital for days.

 

Me with my mother, trying to make me “at home.”

You, who knew pain, with no one to hold.

 

No one beside you, not even for awhile.

As my mother doted, trying to make you smile.

 

I couldn’t understand why you were left all alone --

why your family wasn't there when God called you home.

 

I now know within pain one finds purpose and reason.

I learn this, again, through each of life's seasons.

 

The boy with no name – no, you didn't depart.

Instead, you rest safely here within my heart.

 

Never to be forgotten; I've not been the same.

In honor, I say “Love” when I call out your name.

 

That is the lesson, an ever-bright ember.

A boy who now smiles as he is remembered.

 

And each act of compassion does bear your stamp,

for it is the light that shines from your lamp.


Bridgette Rodriguez
Copyright pending

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boomboom56 commented on The Boy With No Name

11-04-2011

Such feeling and emotion. This brought tears to my eyes. You have such a open heart to allow these words to flow. Good stuff and thanks for sharing. It reminds others to put ourselves second when need be.

brid1234

11/04/2011

Thanks. again. FYI, this poem was catharsis for me, since this was based on reality. I had to write it. I also wrote a short story that accompanies the poem, which you can find at: http://bridgette.8m.com/blank_4.html

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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The Boy With No Name 1
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The Find 0
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Gloriously Me 0
My Love 0
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I Saw Him 0
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