The Break-up

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    The Break-up

    I was sitting in my lonely spot again today
    Wondering when I was going to.......
    To what I just can't seem to say

    My thoughts are scattered and not complete
    My feelings are........
    Not finding a good place to meet

    I hear a dull ringing coming from far away
    My ears are........
    Not hearing the words I see your mouth say

    I seem to have lost interest in me and you
    My heart is........
    Broken and bleeding from the things you do

    I will be glad when this horror movie is done
    Life will again.......
    Be happy, joyful, warm, sunny and fun

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    tierra7 commented on The Break-up

    12-04-2009

    an excellent write on life's broken dreams....Sad....but Beautiful....when ones mind feels displaced.feelin' incomplete....it is difficult to see past the fog in ones mind...when its the heart that takes a beatin' we are all in three parts, body, mind and spirit...take in a deep breath.....exhale...to pull yourself together as a whole....now your true life can Begin...it will be sweeter the second time around...shake off those bittersweet memories if they keep you from growth.....let out your Happy, joyful, warm, sunny & fun side again for someone whom cares..... .Love N Light, Terra @}--'-,- (10+ )

    boomboom56

    12/07/2009

    Thanks for the comment and feelings.

    KimberlySD commented on The Break-up

    11-30-2009

    I like the way it reads. like the spurts of thought you get when day dreaming. Maybe you are more a positive thinker, but the lingering despair in the first part of the poem makes the Hopeful end seem a little too hopeful. lol But it is a great idea- being only one step away from joy again.

    boomboom56

    12/04/2009

    Went through some bad times and am finally seeing a light at the end of the tunnel.

    Passionkey commented on The Break-up

    09-28-2009

    With life there is joy than comes pain....making you feel as through you are insane..but we must pick up the pieces and move on ..there will be a new light shining at dawn.... yes you will find happiest again.......keep believing in you. :)

    boomboom56

    09/29/2009

    Life has been getting better everyday. I just needed to get it out. Thanks for the positive remarks.

    mgsouthard64 commented on The Break-up

    09-21-2009

    you will live your life again and it will be the best days of your life. You and your son, are going to make it. Life goes on and remember you have friends that are here for you if you need it. This poem may be how you feel now but you will find some true love with some other woman and she will bring happiness to your family. You will find all that again with someone new. I am praying for you.

    boomboom56

    09/21/2009

    Thank you pretty lady.

    sin commented on The Break-up

    09-20-2009

    I like the original presentation used for this write. Again, the speaker expresses insight and introspection and offers an honest look at the human condition.

    boomboom56

    09/20/2009

    Thank you. I am at this stage in my life.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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