The Breakup

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The Breakup

The goodbye
      so sad
The sorrow
      so deep
The emptiness
       so cold
The loneliness
      so hard
The pain
      so raw
The tears
      so many

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windsongs commented on The Breakup

08-19-2012

kinda of a joke, prior comment-this was a great write!

windsongs commented on The Breakup

08-19-2012

goodbye, hello-is it me you're looking for-that was a song-I like his all night long a little better-it was a maple tree right-better go check on the cakes!

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

NenaT’s Poems (31)

Title Comments
Title Comments
The Breakup 2
Gone 1
Dreamers Dreaming 3
ALONE 5
When I Look For You 6
The Goodbye 1
Memories of a Tuesday Afternoon 3
A Mother's Prayer 2
She Loves Him 2
THE HAWKMAN 4
Este Corazon (My Heart) 0
In Time 4
The Rendezvous 1
Unrequited 2
JASON 2
May-December Love 1
Forbidden 4
The Romantics 2
La Paloma 0
Wondering 4
Los Angeles 0
A Vague Farewell 0
Ghost-Child 4
Untitled 2
Kaleidescope 2
REFLECTIONS 1
Sunday Morning 2
Honky Tonk Angel 4
It Was Only A Thought 1
Untitled 0
Welcome to My Hell 5