the chambers of insecurity


the chambers of insecurity

I’m sorry I have no words to share

As I sit here and stare

Vacant and Insecure

I try hard to unburden


Define my hair hanging low

Releasing positive vibrations

Are hard to grasps

This energy flow

Atmosphere of nervousness

Is what I got


In my membrane

Over powers

Leaves me bare

Empty and void

Shaking to the core

Chambers of insecurity 

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knight4696 commented on the chambers of insecurity


Blue - This is going straight to my faves! :) You reach so deep in this one. I truly enjoyed! :) Ken



Thanks Ken.. that mean alot.. Glad i made you smile

ApaqRasgirl commented on the chambers of insecurity


terrific piece, very powerful the way you described your feeling, you did great for not having words to share. thanks for sharing love Asha

thecross commented on the chambers of insecurity


nice depth in this piece with a good flow nicely done.



thank you very much.

Rhymer commented on the chambers of insecurity


Very descriptive write, enjoyed the read 10 from me,.................

Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

bluskyinthenite’s Poems (60)

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Title Comments
Enthusiasm Fading 4
Sorry is a empty word 6
Invisible 5
Break 2
Take Flight 4
Searching for my mojo 1
Nature 8
Imagine 2
Nodin's blowing 2
Sons Poem 3
Son's Poem 3
Mobile Cell phone 2
Rock me baby 5
Nebie know more 4
"this trash barrel is still on fire" 4
Total Eclipse 5
Earth's satellite 6
Memorial Day Weekend ~Fatality~ 7
You Don't know Me 9
Drive By 9
re: son's poem 3
RE: sons poems 1
Evolution Distruction 3
Nova 2
Twinkle In His Eye's 2
Put on hold 3
Shadow maker under me 2
Crying a River of Pain 5
Cause and effect 2
regretful sorrow 2nd 2
Shards of ice pierce my heart 4
regretful sorrow 6
the chambers of insecurity 4
I'm to blame for this 2
Into the Universe 2
Memories of contentment 2
Meticulous Imperfection 3
Storms a brewing 5
My mental turmoil my madness 3
Sands of Time 3
Narcissus 3
Steed of Steel 2
Cranium 6
Life is Poetry 4
Looking Glass 3
Broken Wings 3
Lost 2
Echo's threw my mind 1
Lazy cold cold day and here ai " Sitting here looking like this!" 1
Rest 1
Lost in the Mind 2
Love Lost 1
Cant seem to make it flow. "Insane in the brain" 2
Jalapeno Sub 3
No regrets 4
Stair master 1
Lonely for your touch 2
Rain on the Roof 2
Life’s small struggles 3
Auto Pilot 2