The Change

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    The Change

    Rob me of my senses,
    push me beyond,
    pull me into.

    Let everything be one,
    nothing full or empty,
    one which is all.

    But seeing myself pensive,
    i realized even i am not,
    what i was.

    Let it happen,
    the movement,
    the chan
    ge.




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    klassik commented on The Change

    03-11-2010

    Very nice, this is a great write! .

    summerrose35 commented on The Change

    01-26-2010

    beautiful write.creative! I loved this! and will read more!SR

    redbloodink commented on The Change

    01-26-2010

    I like change it is for the best and is how we grow into what we become.... nice write............ red

    SilverGirl commented on The Change

    12-04-2009

    Ah but to partake is the miracle of metamorphosis..you give in to the harsh.. or mellow changes as you travel this journey of life. Short.. sweet.. concise.. This is a very nicely written poem. Nice metaphores.. Great message.. Hugs SG

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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