The Chatroom Blues part 2

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    The Chatroom Blues part 2

    It all started last night
    when the word "hello" ran everyone off.
    It stayed with me
    as I stared at my own name.
    I was there all alone
    in the chatroom again.
    I started to talk
    only to see I was talking to myself.
    It gets so lonesome
    in a chatroom sometimes
    that you do funny things
    like argue with yourself.
    As the chatroom stays empty
    I come to realize
    I have the chatroom blues again.

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    Milkman commented on The Chatroom Blues part 2

    08-01-2009

    Okay I read three of your other poems before this, and I like this one as it is so much more organic than the others. they were all in simple couplets and seemed that the rhyme was more important to you than the message,

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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