The City

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My English teacher posted a crazy dark picture,Of tall buildings,Spider man on buildings etc.I had 10 minutes to write this!

The City

So there is this city..

Doesn’t look so pretty

Where spider man stays

Where huge pictures lay

In the middle of the day

I don’t know what to say..

Because in this dull city

Everything’s so gritty

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You just want to stare..

At what you may ask?

At the mask that covers the past

In Hollywood?

Where everything once stood

A dark and marked memory

What’s been around for more than a century

Caught in a moment of time

On a lame frame that I couldn’t call mine..

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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