The Color Red

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The Color Red

Into the darkness, where I lie
not knowing where to go
It is here, I soon must die
and still have nothing to show

all around me, the color red
is slowly fading away
in my heart, I know I'm dead
and yet I try to stay

To my left, I see the stains
all thanks to that bullet
I try to scream, as it rains
I see where I was hit

Into the ground, I am placed
never to be seen again
My own brother, I had faced
killed by my own kin

I lie here, in this ground
as I slowly rot away
Never again, to make a sound
It's here I'll forever stay

The cops come, by day and night
as they begin to investigate
they wonder why, we had to fight
and what caused all the hate

finally, they decide to take him away
they take him straight to jail
it's there, I hope he'll forever stay
and one day he'll burn in hell

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Chaos128 commented on The Color Red

12-23-2009

Probably not a story we'll be seeing on on Hallmark Hall of Fame, but it holds the attention, and for all the right reasons. You do dark well, Venom. 10 exposition points!

chucky1982 commented on The Color Red

10-04-2009

wow venom i love this, beautifully written this is just the way i like them. bravo.

rougepriest commented on The Color Red

10-01-2009

yikes a tragic end for you both nicely written good rhyming the scheme works meter stays close good job i reckon! better than a lot of em nice and clean

If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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