The Colors of a Fated Love

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Romantic love always fails. What starts as gold, turns to black. I've forever attempted to disprove Mr. Robert Frost's beautifully sad poem, Nothing Gold Can Stay, but can never dispute his wisdom. I give up, Mr. Frost, and concur, nothing gold can stay. Ever.

The Colors of a Fated Love

Cherry red and sadness blue
The colors of my time with you
How the seasons change so fast
The summer sun is in the past.

The brilliance of a gold sunrise
The teardrops blue did fill your eyes
And all about the day's green promise,
Soon fell the night of black upon us.

Oh, give me back that virgin hue
The brilliant nights discovering you
The infinite blackness of summer skies
That backs the stars within your eyes.

But the rainbow fades from view with the hours
And the sun is obscured by grey, clouded showers
And greener grasses claim their due
When lights no longer shine on you.

So perfect colors go astray
The memories of a brighter day
Tarnished silver and dying black
The hues of days not coming back.

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Crush commented on The Colors of a Fated Love

04-23-2019

Wow! The way you convey so much heart and emotion in such short lines. It's beautiful. I would love to read more.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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