The Cowboy's Last Ride

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There were no doubt thousands of unsung hero's in the old west... Those nobody's who went about their basic thankless jobs day after day, working hard, and not wanting any thank yous, or standing in anybody's spotlight for just being who they were, and doing what they did... They all dreamed of how they wanted to end up... Yea, that last ride where they finally hung up their spurs for the last time... They'd never tell anyone because they had a code of few words... Speculation was for news people and bankers and they didn't trust either one... I hope you're able to see inside this old cowboy and a little of what he was made of... This is not cowboy poetry, in case you're wanting to draw parallels... It's just a story in song and verse.... Hope you enjoy, The Cowboy's Last Ride... Doug...

The Cowboy's Last Ride

The Cowboy’s Last Ride
Doug Jackson, 010409


Starin’ out over the hills of the prairie
A cowboy keeps eye on his herd for the night
Off in the distance he hears some coyotes
And, wonders if they’ll come callin’ ‘fore light

The moonlight softens a long hard day’s sun
The wind gently whispers a familiar ol’ song
Seems pretty quiet, but the night still ain’t done
He shifts in his saddle, right where he belongs

He’s not what he is, to not be forgotten
Just an ol’ cowboy, who lives a hard life
His fate and his plans, don’t have much in common
But, he thinks they’re waitin’, at the end of his ride

His thoughts turn to trails, he made in his day
Towns with hot meals, some card games he won
And, there was a woman, who begged him to stay
But, his saddle kept callin‘, so he up and rode on

You ask him his dreams, he prob’ly won’t say
You tell him a tale, he’ll see through the lie
You ask him who won, ‘tween the blue and the gray
He’ll un-strap that Colt, that hangs by his side

Many a campfire the ol’ cowboy’s known
Many a sunset, spent ridin’ the line
Many hard rains, that he rode out alone
Many regrets, that he left h-e-r, behind

Now, he’ll never know, he’s a dime novel hero
And, every kid’s dream, how a man ought’a be
Stories of his time, will someday be told
Of legends of his kind, who made history

And, as to that woman well, he still kept the ring
He just couldn’t see, past the long trail ahead
He never put stock in what next year might bring
For all that he knew, he might just end up dead

He’s not what he was, to not be forgotten
Just an ol’ cowboy, who lived a hard life
His fate and his plans, never had much in common
But, he thought they would, when he made - his last ride...

Yea, he thought they would, when he made... his last ride...

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gmcookie commented on The Cowboy's Last Ride

02-06-2011

How did I miss this Laydbak? You need to keep writing, my old cowboy friend. This one gets a 10...

Hampton commented on The Cowboy's Last Ride

01-01-2011

Great write............................................................................Hampton

Stardrift commented on The Cowboy's Last Ride

12-31-2010

Happy New Year! How been, brother! So yeah, I've been out of the loop for about a year - long story. Dude, I totally love these cowboy writes! I just gotta hear them too - got your site. Looks like Nashville dun got in yer blood a bit there, lol! Damn, I think these have inspired me to try something about the Frontier! Way too cool - and hickory-smoked 10!

Tempestlady commented on The Cowboy's Last Ride

12-15-2010

I can hear the melody so pristine and clear in my head. Wish the life today was more simple like back then. Good song/poetry. Write on....Tlady

blackfootlady commented on The Cowboy's Last Ride

11-29-2010

I like the way the last two line flowed together using a repeated effect,Nice Harmony threw-out this write.I really liked this.Beside I happen to Have love of the good old westren Movies,lol.God Bless-Black

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Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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