The Crash (Rejection)

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    The Crash (Rejection)

    We rushed into this “love"

    And hit “nothing” like a wall

     As the inertia from the crash played out

    We watched our hearts fall

    From our chests

    Into each other’s laps

    Not considering what we held

    We rushed away from the crash

    We ran separate ways

    Never thought to grab our own hearts

    So we ran away with the wrong ones

    And now our new beginnings may never start.

    We ran and ran

    Until we were safely away

    Didn’t notice we had each other’s hearts

    Until it was too late

    Now my heart belongs to him

    And his belongs to me

    And it hurts for us to face this

    Because we know that we could never be

    So I keep his heart stored

    With the rest of my collection

    Because without having my own heart to give

    Everyone else just gets what I have left to offer…

    Rejection.

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    Zlady commented on The Crash (Rejection)

    09-29-2009

    This speaks volumes of the young people today, rushing to find love. Still in such a hurry not realizing what you've taken away from the relationship. It's sad that there is nothing left for anyone else but rejection. Your poem sends me thru a path of emotions, hills and valleys. You have captured a lot in this poem. I liked it.
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    MsHangtime

    10/03/2009

    Thank u very much. I have a feeling that I'm going to love ur poetry. I hope u enjoy the rest of my poetry.

    acurtis5 commented on The Crash (Rejection)

    09-27-2009

    I liked your poem very much i understand about someone taking your heart with them it is almost more cruel than breaking their heart great job!
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    MsHangtime

    10/03/2009

    I'm glad u can feel where I'm comng from. Thnx for commentin n i will b readin ur poetry

    scrye commented on The Crash (Rejection)

    09-27-2009

    Veryyy nice. I like the imagery and the flow. The prose was placed so well it truly added to the imagery. Bravo, very well penned to canvas. True artform. Keep posting and this one definatly gets a ten from me....
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    MsHangtime

    10/03/2009

    thanks scrye. ur poetry is truel inspirin to me. i could do so much better compared to the masterpieces that u put together

    VICDMAC30 commented on The Crash (Rejection)

    09-27-2009

    Ilike that very much...But now I guess u have to some day let his heart go or u cant move on...feel me..Nice poem, I liked it very much...
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    MsHangtime

    10/03/2009

    i've let it go but he still has mine. thnx for commentin

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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