The Creatures

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If you are offended easily, think twice before reading this.

The Creatures

Again, I heard it
Loudly
There they were
Jumping and hollering
Breaking my peace
In meditation.

Ugh.
I moved here and
It was so quiet
And these creatures
They deny the gift
Of fucking quiet
I don't like it.

Now I know what
Other neighbors felt
When it was me who
Was the loud one.

I remember
Falling in the yard
It did not phase me
If I barfed.

I got in fights
I took so many
Flights from my
Reality of
Life.

Now, I'm humbled
Into seeing
What a decent human
Being
I've become.

8-22-09

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rkb11395 commented on The Creatures

08-23-2009

noise can be frustrating, but when it comes from one of Gods creations, be kind,sensible,loving and it will be in control by its creatorpatience is needed as is knowledge of "truth" and favorable words.

frog

08/24/2009

very true.

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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