The Daffodil

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    The Daffodil

     The Daffodil,
    beautiful,
    wonderful,
    graceful,
    and quite a dight,
    but now bestroyed,
    for the storm has come,
    and passed,
    ripping and tearing,
    its petals,
    stem,
    and beauty,
    now destryoed,
    drooping sadly,
    hurt to the core,
    and now i realise,
    this daffodil,
    is just like me,
    we are one and the same,
    both hurt by the passing storm,
    and left to the swarm,
    all we can do now,
    is hope and pray,
    that love and compassion,
    will find us too,
    one day.....

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    babygirl4028 commented on The Daffodil

    03-18-2011

    Wow. That is a wonderful poem. perfect comparison between the daffodil and you. You are really good at poems. 10 from me :)
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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on The Daffodil

    03-18-2011

    I like the comparison between you and the Daffodil. How the storm affected you both, but you both continued to grow.
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    phantom commented on The Daffodil

    03-18-2011

    woow great write ........i like the way you put it together......10 from me
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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