The Dance

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    • icarus0580
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    The Dance

     Staring up at stars
    feeling like i'm under a cool blanket
    getting lost in the covers of the night

    How many dreams reside there
    How far have they gone
    Does anyone ever look at us
    And wonder

    Silently creeping across the night
    A gently curving dance
    Always in motion

    It's looking for partners
    But we're already part of the dance
    Circling in a celestial promenade
    through time and space

    Follow the stars
    Seek the wisdom
    Cast your dreams

    Hope

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    bluewolf commented on The Dance

    11-24-2009

    How true these words hold, a token of imaginative release into the celestial Heavens. Lovely wording and imagery; excellent work.
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    Mareann commented on The Dance

    10-22-2009

    Okay, i'm impressed, you have gone and done it. This is another fantastic poem. Good writing, thanks, mareann http://mareannspoetry.ning.com
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    wheelsal commented on The Dance

    08-18-2009

    You have captured the dance and the dreams of a poet. Sally
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    icarus0580

    08/18/2009

    I've always been a stargazer. It sets my mind free. Thanks for your comment

    GentleT commented on The Dance

    08-18-2009

    An uplifting read. May your hopes and dreams bring happiness to you.
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    icarus0580

    08/18/2009

    I'm glad you liked it. Kind of simple, yet carries a message. Thanks for commenting

    StandingBear commented on The Dance

    08-09-2009

    A nicely written work relating star's journeys, peace, and hope. Great write.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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