The Dance

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The Dance

I stand alone in a crowd,
Wondering, shouting, screaming aloud.
No one hears my heart felt cry.
As i weep, tears fall from my eyes.

I gave everything, left nohing to chance,
just to live in the moment for that one special dance.
We spin and twirl in lifes dreams,
we give and take not caring what it brings.

Sometimes we spin out of control.
Give up everything end up lost and low.
Yet at other times things come to be,
they make us happy, joyful with glee.

So why do i stand wrapped in your arms,
afraid of the world and all its harm.
You have the ability to aleave all the pain.
I give you my heart, wash over me like rain.

Dry my tears, hold my hand,
take me in your arms again.
I give you my heart with all the holes.
fix it, mend it, help me gain control.

i give you everything, all of me.
take it or leave it or just let me be.
Hopefully we begin a grand romance,
let the music play, lets start the dance.

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free2poet commented on The Dance

07-01-2009

I really loved this!!!!! A awesome poem!! I can really relate to this.

photochick commented on The Dance

07-01-2009

romance is painted so pretty and poetic here you are very talented nice work you capture its essence with ease thanks for writing it please keep going i love reading all your poems

scrye commented on The Dance

07-01-2009

Daniel I love this poem how very beautifully you describe romance. Very vivid. Nice work hun, keep writing so we can keep enjoying. A 10 from me.

tenderpoison commented on The Dance

06-06-2009

first stanza caught me, the next couple were a little forced feeling but the last three stanza'a....oh, the last three were straight from your heart, weren't they? overall, really good job...

Panaramicpoet commented on The Dance

06-06-2009

Warm and heart felt. I like how you can feel as well as see the grace and action of feeling. Keep up the good work.

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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