the darkness within

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    this was some random quote that i came up with

    the darkness within
    As the darkness awakes
    i see to be all alone
    and have no way out
    and yet
    the pain i feel
    is so burdenful
    that i seem to break
    at the sight
    of loving you
    and wanting you
    but yet
    i cannot have you

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    killingP13 commented on the darkness within

    02-11-2011

    the pain of wanting something so much seems to fill the streets of the whole world
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    angelchaser commented on the darkness within

    02-07-2011

    Always a pleasure to read your work, madam Vampire^;..;^
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    thecross commented on the darkness within

    01-11-2011

    A situation that leads to more questions then there are answers and an intense pounding of the inner self
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    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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