the darkness within

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  • VampireGirl666
  • you broke my heart.. now i break your fucking face...

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this was some random quote that i came up with

the darkness within

As the darkness awakes
i see to be all alone
and have no way out
and yet
the pain i feel
is so burdenful
that i seem to break
at the sight
of loving you
and wanting you
but yet
i cannot have you

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killingP13 commented on the darkness within

02-11-2011

the pain of wanting something so much seems to fill the streets of the whole world

angelchaser commented on the darkness within

02-07-2011

Always a pleasure to read your work, madam Vampire^;..;^

thecross commented on the darkness within

01-11-2011

A situation that leads to more questions then there are answers and an intense pounding of the inner self

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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