the darkness within

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  • VampireGirl666
  • you broke my heart.. now i break your fucking face...

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this was some random quote that i came up with

the darkness within

As the darkness awakes
i see to be all alone
and have no way out
and yet
the pain i feel
is so burdenful
that i seem to break
at the sight
of loving you
and wanting you
but yet
i cannot have you

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killingP13 commented on the darkness within

02-11-2011

the pain of wanting something so much seems to fill the streets of the whole world

angelchaser commented on the darkness within

02-07-2011

Always a pleasure to read your work, madam Vampire^;..;^

thecross commented on the darkness within

01-11-2011

A situation that leads to more questions then there are answers and an intense pounding of the inner self

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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