The Darkness

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  • Sadness
    • jerseycrtz
    • Your the one for me, and I'm the one for you, take the both of us and we're the perfect two. <3

    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this when I was at school and I was mad at someone. Yes, it's childish, but 1) I am a child 2) It's my poem

    The Darkness

    The darkness surrounds me
    as I quetly sit in my seat
    my mind is racing through
    different possibilities
    but I keep them to myself
    How did she know?
    Why did she tell?
    I think until I decide
    I really don't want to know

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    zoeyvlad101 commented on The Darkness

    05-04-2010

    Nice, who were you mad at...

    Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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