The day i met u

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    The day i met u

    The day i met u was the best day of my life
    full or love and never sad
    the day i met u was the day i had a vision
    a vision of life and blue skies 
      the day i met u there was stars in my eyes 
    like the stars at night 
    they sparkled with every surprise
    the day i met u my life had changed 
    in a good way i felt the love lift me up 
    and it took away the pain  

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    SILKYTWEED commented on The day i met u

    07-21-2009

    Nice Write....beautiful dedication to the experience and joy that is associative of love...thank you for sharing!

    rossmangeles commented on The day i met u

    06-21-2009

    So nicely written. The day I read your poem I smiled and have a very good day. The day I read your poem, you kept me yearning for more lines to read and enjoy. Cheers!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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