The day i met u

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    The day i met u

    The day i met u was the best day of my life
    full or love and never sad
    the day i met u was the day i had a vision
    a vision of life and blue skies 
      the day i met u there was stars in my eyes 
    like the stars at night 
    they sparkled with every surprise
    the day i met u my life had changed 
    in a good way i felt the love lift me up 
    and it took away the pain  

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    SILKYTWEED commented on The day i met u

    07-21-2009

    Nice Write....beautiful dedication to the experience and joy that is associative of love...thank you for sharing!

    rossmangeles commented on The day i met u

    06-21-2009

    So nicely written. The day I read your poem I smiled and have a very good day. The day I read your poem, you kept me yearning for more lines to read and enjoy. Cheers!

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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