The day

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    The day

    I remember the day all to well
    when I met someone from far away
    we begain to talk what a wonderful day
    I had just had my heart broken
    but my words were not unspoken
    you sat and listened to every little detail
    you never walked away
    we started talking about my past
    I knew the time had come at last
    to let someone into my past
    it was very painful and hard to do
    I did not know if you
    would have thought any different of me
    as I think of that day
    I know there is no way
    that you would not stay
    The sun was shining the birds were singing
    and we became best friends
    you did not turn away from me
    and that for I was glad to see
    now a month and a half has gone by
    and when we talk
    it seems like time stands still
    I miss you when we dont talk for a day or two
    because I have never had a friend like you
    every minute I spend talking
    with you I cherish
    If you cant see why I remember this day
    its because a part of my life changed
    for the best when I met you
    my friend

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    Drivingczar commented on The day

    03-22-2009

    Open and honest! Nice poem!

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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