the devil i adore

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    the devil i adore
    Kiss me every day like you did tonight 
    Hold me in your arms so tight
    Devour me like a sinful fruit
    Not caring of any fault as you enjoy
    Touch every part of me like a rose petal
    Softly
    gently
    stroking 
    sensing
    Drive me crazy
    tease me 
    tempt me
    provoke me in every way 
    Take me to the point of no return
    until I scream passionately your name
    Kiss me biting my lips shut 
    hush my mouth with pleasure
    Make me moan without measure
    Punish me as you well know
    making my sweet face glow
    Be the teacher showing me more 
    talk to me a little dirty
    and i will act a little flirty 
    pass your finger up n down 
    making me quiver in ecstatic emotion
    Anticipating what's to come
    Until I can't take anymore waiting
    make me yell," come on papi! I want more!"
    drop your daily halo more often 
    be the devil i adore

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    slimgoodwoody commented on the devil i adore

    09-21-2016

    Excellent writing! Keep up the wonderful work! I feel and enjoy the playful yet sexy nature of this poem.
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    TheLastCowboy commented on the devil i adore

    03-05-2014

    Wow I love and feel the passion in this write, you can feel the desire in the words as well as the lust. LOVE this write, great piece-hands down a perfect 10!!! I wouldn't change anyhthing, I would leave this poem as is!!!
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    poett

    03/05/2014

    thank you ... i was being playful with my husband ... and the thought got into my mind. i just had to come write it down when hewas peacefully sleeping n loudly snoring. hahaha... need to show it to him soon. i appreciate your kind words n time reading it.

    poett commented on the devil i adore

    03-05-2014

    this poem is still a draft. havent decided what i will change. grammar still not set. ive been using my phone to post so it wont let me use capitalization here on op... please comment n read ...
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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    EMOTIONAL CHAOS 6 05/21/2013
    YOU GIVE ME EVERYTHING 3 04/24/2013
    SENTIMENTAL NOSTALGIA 2 01/29/2013
    WHEN ISABELLA SMILES 4 01/21/2013
    AN OLD OWL'S HOPE 2 01/20/2013
    AN OWL'S LOVE CRIES 5 12/10/2012
    SWEET SMELL OF DANGER 3 09/23/2011
    FOUND MYSELF TONIGHT 7 03/22/2010
    SAD 6 03/18/2010
    Es tan Facil / It's so easy 6 02/23/2010
    MY CHOCOLATE LOVE INSANITY 5 02/17/2010
    CAN YOU STAND THE RAIN? 7 02/16/2010
    WHAT WOULD YOU DO 6 02/16/2010
    WITCHY MOM 5 02/16/2010
    LOVE IS FORGOTTEN 1 02/16/2010
    THUNDER STORMS WON'T GO AWAY 1 02/16/2010
    OPEN DOOR 0 02/16/2010
    A ROSE IS ALL HE LEFT 2 02/16/2010
    I'LL SLICE OPEN MY VEINS 2 02/16/2010
    ERES MI MOTIVO - YOU ARE MY MOTIVE 0 02/16/2010
    A LOVER'S FULL MOON 0 02/16/2010
    I WAS LEFT IN SOLITUDE 0 02/16/2010
    I AM SO SMALL IN YOUR HANDS 0 02/16/2010
    ITS DIFFICULT ( ES DIFICIL) 0 02/16/2010
    LOVE 1 02/16/2010
    DEATH STOP TAUNTING ME 0 02/16/2010
    MI QUERIDA BELLA - MY DEAR BELLA 0 02/06/2010
    EXCRUCIATING PUNISHMENT 2 02/01/2010
    WARNING: RED ROSES OR HOT FLAMES 3 12/15/2009
    FOR ALL PARENTS ESPECIALLY THOSE WITH TEENAGERS 6 07/10/2009
    POETRY IS MY LIFE 1 07/08/2009
    MY IMMORTAL LOVE 0 07/08/2009
    WELCOME TO HELL 3 05/20/2009
    Pensive Gaze 1 04/27/2009
    In My Father's Hands 1 04/27/2009
    I Am Not Alone 1 04/27/2009
    I Stand Alone 4 04/27/2009
    I Wish I Could Just Fly Away 1 04/27/2009
    To Play 1 04/27/2009
    Everything Is Collapsing Around Me 0 04/27/2009
    Lets Divide It By Two 1 04/27/2009
    You Mean Everything To Me 1 04/27/2009
    It Only Takes A Minute 2 04/27/2009
    DEATH 3 04/27/2009
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