The Dreamer's Dream

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The Dreamer's Dream

The dreamer dreams of sparkling streams

Of starry skys and moonlit nights

Of mountain peeks and grassy hills

Of prairies grand and valleys of sweetly smelling flowers

He dreams of bliss and happiness

Of peace and prosperity

Of hope and love and leisure life

And never wants to wake

The dreamer dreams and dares to dream

Of a world that is fake

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guardianangel76 commented on The Dreamer's Dream

09-14-2011

ya...well the dreamer fails to realize that he may only dream for a lil while...then reality is here...what will he do with it ?promise another soul that he can give them the moon?...it'll never happen...for he will never be able to be real...for the sake of his dream...lmao

SerenityWintirs commented on The Dreamer's Dream

09-14-2011

Love, LOVE this one. This is exactly what I was talking about earlier. Beautiful imagery.Pretty words to suck the reader into the piece. The metering could use some work in a few places but overall, this is fantastic

stever commented on The Dreamer's Dream

11-21-2009

wish i could sleep an dream 4 ever,,love this one,,

frazel5 commented on The Dreamer's Dream

11-19-2009

ah yes....the lovely world of dreams. So beautiful, but yet, there is the cold reality of waking up. It's a difficult thing, but I think you captured it well. It's very vague, so it can apply to anyone. Awesome job!

Rygar commented on The Dreamer's Dream

11-19-2009

a very interesting journey through the dreamers eye, only to to be slapped with the cold reality of the waking world. nice job!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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