The Earthquake

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The Earthquake

The Earthquake

 

 

With no place to run

or hide when we heard

the earth-shattering word -

resuscitate being used

concerning your condition

it was like the earth

moving beneath our feet

all hell broke loose

leaving us alone

with no place to turn

shaken to the core

as tremors are sent

throughout our bodies

leaving us shuddering

from the sudden impact

forcing us

to hold onto each other

for support

as the ground gives way

we feel the earth open up

and us being sucked deep

within a matter of minutes

that seemed like days

totally unsuspected

for this was to be

a routine test

not a cataclysmic

life or death experience

but you willed

your way back

to life and us again

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SavVySam commented on The Earthquake

02-07-2010

OM Goodness! This is a frightening nightmare, and the term earthquake does apply so well...horrible experience...happy for the turn of event toward the the finish of the poem.

Rhymer commented on The Earthquake

02-06-2010

Vivid imagery, and an excellent imaginative write. 10 from me.

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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