The Earth's a Beautiful Place

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    The Earth's a Beautiful Place

    The mountains tall and strong
    The wind sings a song
    A bird's cry
    Like a soft lullaby
    A river twists and turns
    The water churns
    The valleys are low
    A stream runs slow
    The prairies calm
    An island with a palm
    The oceans' waves
    A cove and its cave
    The Earth's a beautiful place
    save Earth and space

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    earthly commented on The Earth's a Beautiful Place

    09-04-2010

    YES!! this says it all!! every landscape setting-namaste...Earthly

    countrypoet commented on The Earth's a Beautiful Place

    09-24-2009

    Beautifully descriptive and idealistically progressive.You have a wonderful talent for rhymes.Study the old masters of poetry when you get a chance as they can teach you many things about the other forms of poetry.(Robert Frost,Dylan Thomas,Carl Sandberg,Keats,Shakespeare,etc.)

    biteme commented on The Earth's a Beautiful Place

    08-17-2009

    wow i really like this poem it is very creative and has agreat flow through the words! keep up the good work!!

    soulwriter commented on The Earth's a Beautiful Place

    07-29-2009

    Ah a young mind that like poetry - read the old poets too if you don't already like Poe Sands Keats the Brownings and Dickenson just to name a few. Also study poetry and it's form then you will be blowing away everybody on this site in no time. Great job ... Write On and create strong. If you would like please read my Words Worth

    klassik commented on The Earth's a Beautiful Place

    07-29-2009

    your on your way! you are very precocious! i wish i had started this early! well done very nice, congrats!

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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