The End Still Creeps

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    The End Still Creeps
    Today I feel the panic
    It is going Through my body
    So fast I can't get it to stop.
    The thoughts, the feelings, the wanting
    to end won't cease.
    I don't want to be here it makes it worse.
    Being uncomfortable and not knowing
    What is next creeps under my skin.
    I need to be myself and here is not the place.
    On my toes all of the time is not the way to live.
    I want to go free.
    What is my purpose?
    Is all of this pain and diseases not enough?
    God let me come to you.
    It is to hard for me on earth.
    Let me live free from pain.

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    hotnat123 commented on The End Still Creeps

    09-14-2009

    I love this piece, its good to know you're not the only one suffering
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    btandntmom

    09/15/2009

    I feel the same. Thank you so much for reading and enjoying my poem. please read more of them. I'll be adding more soon.

    Platti commented on The End Still Creeps

    05-01-2009

    I love the way you write, it gives me a feeling of helplessness though...don't know if that's what you intended while writing this piece
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    btandntmom

    09/15/2009

    Thank you for reading my poem. At that time in my life that's the way I felt.I'm better and will be adding some new poems soon. Please read more of mine. I love the comments

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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