the end

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  • Lost Love

    the end

    it's not the end of love that hurts,

    but the end of everything



    the monopoly game

    we never finished

    the stars we never named together

    and all the places

    we never touched



    the dreams we spoke of

    the plans we made

    and all that we envisioned

    that never came to be



    the hearts that joined

    the hands that held

    the love that fell



    and, having fallen,

    shattered



    how tiny are these pieces

    we may never fit together



    no,

    it's not the end

    of love that hurts



    but the end of everything

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    dontwritetrite commented on the end

    06-14-2009

    I like your poem and keep up the good work. Dare to dream and become more, live more, laugh more and sorry for your pain....

    Vincent commented on the end

    12-04-2008

    Bening in love is a wonderful thing, it makes our hearts beat fast. But that gitty new love, just nevet seems to last. But I believe if you love someone that love will never die, it just not like that new love that get us so high. Thumbs up

    tinygirl commented on the end

    12-03-2008

    i enjoyed your poem read some of mine tinygirl

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    hollowgirl’s Poems (38)

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