THE ENTER ME

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    THE ENTER ME

     THE ENTER ME

    The enter me
    Can you look beyond the statue
    The person that you can’t see
    This is the real you
    Are you trying to be someone
    That you are not meant to be
    Some of us would be stun
    If we could truly see
    The enter me look for love
    And comfort in a friend
    A gift that come from above
    A bond that will never end
    We try to portray an image are style
    That don’t show the real me
    That will only last a while
    Then you want to be free
    Trying to be a tough guy
    Saying you don’t need no one
    Then you wonder why
    Life is no fun
    Using  drug alcohol  and drinks
    Trying to find peace of mind
    Just take time to think
    Please take the time
    Let people see the person
    The one that is trap inside
    I bet they would be stun
    If they know the person you are trying to hide
    He is really a person that cares
    A person that need love to
    They have a lift to share
    Could this person be you
    Don’t build up a wall
    And shut everyone out
    Be proud and stand tall
    Don’t be full of doubt
    Let people in so they can see
    The person who you are
    The person you should be
    A bright and shinning star

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    laydbak1 commented on THE ENTER ME

    03-15-2011

    This is a very nice write Clift... You have a few minor grammatical and spelling glitches, but overall it's a very honest, personal plea for people to look beneath the surface for what's truly there... I think everyone is at least a little bit like this with strangers... More often than not, what you see isn't always what you should form your opinions about with the whole... Well done... Kudo's here...
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    optimistic commented on THE ENTER ME

    02-27-2011

    All is true only for the ones who truly want to be friends and not to make things crash in your life. THis is a good write
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    Mrpoetry commented on THE ENTER ME

    02-23-2011

    Amen once again my brother in Christ ............................
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    jamila commented on THE ENTER ME

    02-17-2011

    very nice poem clifton...how's everything with you? long time to talk..i am still existing in doing poems here... keep it up! Jamila
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    Necy commented on THE ENTER ME

    02-11-2011

    HI Mr. Cliff, True freedom is with human spirit and is the way of life. The first step to personal freedom is awareness. This is the mastery of intent. Always do your best no more no less. Regardless of the quality, do your best. Best regards, Necy
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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    THE ENTER ME 19 02/01/2011
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    A BEAUTFUL LIFE 28 09/08/2009
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    BE A PRAYER NOT A PLAYER 31 08/19/2009
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    RESCUE ME 31 08/17/2009
    DEATH 39 07/22/2009
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