The Essence of Beauty Describe Into Perfection

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This is my first ever Haiku, and my first love haiku.


Love you!

The Essence of Beauty Describe Into Perfection

How awesome is the hiaku?
just look at these rad words?
So utterly cool
Truly awesome haiku
Can you even believe it's yours
It's true: I love you!!!

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bforibus commented on The Essence of Beauty Describe Into Perfection

10-08-2010

olay. short and sweet. straight to the point. great job soup a loup.

Chaos128 commented on The Essence of Beauty Describe Into Perfection

10-05-2010

Ha ha I'm all for it. "I'm the haiku all other haikus wish they could be, and YOU got me." Once again, Superchick shows how it's done : )

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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