The Fallen

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  • melanie23
  • I should be publishing a book of poetry soon.

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i wrote this the day after my birthday. when things have finally come to an end i will explain why.

The Fallen

I have fallen into oblivion.
I think not of climbing out.
I am surrounded by darkness,
Yet it comforts me.
  Last I saw the light,
  My heart was torn from my chest.
  I watched as it was riped in half.
  It and I burned until we turned to ash.
So I sank into the inky darkness.
I let it wrap it's lonely arms around me.
I have no fear of a obismal existance,
For at last I am home.


                                                       04-02-09

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Poetster commented on The Fallen

09-01-2009

I have had those moments of darkness myself. The night knows my name too.

Singcanary commented on The Fallen

08-26-2009

Life is about many moods that take us to the depth of laughter and pain...I felt her pain...good job...

TheAngelOfDeath commented on The Fallen

08-26-2009

Oh but home is a cold and lonley word..Only to be spoken if the hate inside has boiled to the point that you have givin up on your original dream..The dreams that corroped you..The dreams that made you who you are... ( Great job but it was a little short. It could have been longer) Your freind and fellow poet Grim

When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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