The Farewell Message

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  • FLAWLES
  • I am the birth of a legend and the mold of an icon; and I've installed myself on the desktop of the world for its inhabitants to keep their eye on.

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Hello fellow poet.  I'm glad this is your choice;  but PLEASE read jademelissa74's "The Messages Of Farewell" first, for the typing of her voice.  She wrote this cause she knew, I could not resist, chewing it up, and spitting it out.  So now I give you this.

The Farewell Message

The messages of farewell, that we mortals write today,

 

Are sometimes the feelings, we’re afraid to give or to say.

 

A new butterfly above, leaves this mistress in despair.

 

Intimidated by her passion, ashamed of his own passion he bares.

 

Loud, like sounding bells, poorly, as in dismay.

 

He can’t retract his needs;  and rushes back, to where she lay.

 

“Seeking my body to love, you find yourself pleading fair”.

 

Is like an “I told you so”;  and hates that, “she went there”.

 

 

“Your heart may grow colder, but it will never spill”.

 

Is another statement he hears, that comes from his own weak will.

 

“The cup fulfilled of passion from which your lips are now wet”

 

Her words distract him;  cause he’s not finished yet.

 

“My soul has far more fire, than you have frost to chill.”

 

Is the last thing he want to hear;  but he tries, still.

 

“Your body has more desire, than you can make your mind forget!”

 

He says, “That’s ok.  I’ll be back for more, of what made my lips wet!”

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jademelissa74 commented on The Farewell Message

06-23-2009

Ha ha ha, you can't resist a good write, can you? Great Job! I am glad that you liked the piece that much! I am honored!

FLAWLES

06/23/2009

Don't give me that "glad you liked it that much stuff". You did that on purpose. But you're right. I couldn't resist. Do you think we need to stop this? People may be talkin'

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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