The finished product.

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     I you are going through a difficult circumstance, because of a boss, friends, family, or other, that either "life", or you have created,   the final  result of that "test"  will be beautiful, or "other", depending on our own response to it.

    The finished product.

                         

                If sun and fun, and happy times,
            are given to us from God,
                Then surely corresponding pain,
            and rain are for life's sod.
     
                 Some of the nicest folks I've met,
            have known a bit of sorrow,
                  That trouble for today may mean,
             a better "You", tomorrow.

                  The grind on sand, to make a pearl
              to look so grand someday,
                   Remember, it takes friction
               there's just no other way.

                    There  is a quality in life,
                that is acquired through pain,
                     And all those undesirables,
                 could end up as your gain.
     

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    UnbreakableLove commented on The finished product.

    08-12-2009

    What doesn't kill us only makes us stronger....and you have so sweetly put it in this poem. I like it a lot. :-)
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    organicchick commented on The finished product.

    07-20-2009

    Excellent and so very true! I also believe nothing in life that is worthwhile comes easy. Really nice flow and thought behind this.
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    Tempy commented on The finished product.

    07-16-2009

    this is wonderfully written so clean and precise, it's nice for a good mind set. take care
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    ordnung

    07/17/2009

    Thank you for your kind words.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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